Languaje Arts Blog!: My Myth!

That story waS VERY GOOD AND THE FINAL WAS VERY STRANGE...but i liked it .

youm have mistakes like thi:
- you don't say Martina and Luis can't be happiness.
you say Martina and Luis could not be more happy.

and you make amistake by congusing the t with the f-- for to tor.

and that you said she got sleep and is she got slept.
and asleep is aslept.

other mistake was apear and is apeared.

you put talke instead of talkeD.

it was like if she doesn't exists is she didn't exist.